Disgust
A Poem by Jackie
Consumed by disgust. Mixed emotions in such 
There is so much
To be discussed
Hidden & untouched
Should not be brushed
Aside
To hide
There is so much
Disloyal and distrust
The royal and unjust
So spoiled and corrupt
Inside
Unjustified
There is so much
To be discussed
Hidden & untouched
Continues to be brushed
Aside
To hide
There is so much
Consumed by disgust
Mixed emotions in such
A mighty terrible rush
Inside
I fight
August 22nd, 2016
© 2016 Jackie
Author's Note
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August 22nd 2016
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I love the way you've composed your poem...
"There is so much
Consumed by disgust "
repeating these lines were a great idea indeed :) great one !
keep writing :D
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words and constructive critiscicm. Please if you can if you can find she tim.. read moreThank you for your kind words and constructive critiscicm. Please if you can if you can find she time tale a look at some of the others as well.. Thank you:)
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Added on August 22, 2016
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Author
JackieEau claire, WI
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Hello folks I'm 27 Love all music, hardcore gamer, and avid writer. Been writing since I was 15. although feel I've most definitely started a whole new story. Older wiser and and mostly every thing I .. more..
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