Turn it off(original)

I must admit. This one I do find to be quite painful to read just simply because it is so repetitive. Go ahead and check it out at your own risk.

I wish
I wish I
I wish I could
I wish I could turn it off

I wish
I wish I
I wish I could
I wish I could blindly stare

I only
I only wish
I only wish you
I only wish you thought I cared

I only
I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish I could stop

I only
I only wish
I only wish you
I only wish you thought

I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish I could
I only wish I could turn it off

I only
I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish i could blindly stare

I only
I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish I didn't care

I only
I only wish
I only wish I
I only wish I didn't care


Oct 18th, 2016(earlier this morning)

Author's Note

Please do check them out. And comment, critique. Express what you yhink and how you feel about each. Please and thank you:)

Reviews

[wordman]

well jackie it seems you are a song writer !

[Jackie]

Yesss... More now than I was previously. Did you actually read this fully. I mean reason I ask is cause it seemed for me to be awfully reppetitive which repetitive can be good. But I felt this one was awful. Which was why I rewrote it to make so it wasn't so excessive. Anyway thank you's so much. I really do appreciate it. And I would very much like to be a composer or something. But not sure how to go about it or how I would even start. Any thoughts or advice would be super great! Thanks again for your time.

[wordman]

most of today's songs are exactly that ! i don`t like a lot of them,but who cares right !
yes i read it all.