Redeem

A Poem by Jackie

Love, respect. Redeem me of what's left

Give me peace
Give me equality
Give me relief
Give me....

Love
Respect
Redeem me
Of what's left

Give me hope
Relieve this rope
In which I choke
Give me

The power
The ability
The strength
To set us free

Give me peace
Give me equality
Give me relief
Give me

Love
Respect
Redeem me
Of what's left

November 11th
Copyright 2016

© 2016 Jackie

Author's Note

Was originally called "give me" but now shooting for "redeem" tell me what y'all think. Thanks and very much appreciated.

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Added on November 11, 2016
Last Updated on November 11, 2016

Author

Jackie

Eau claire, WI

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Hello folks I'm 27 Love all music, hardcore gamer, and avid writer. Been writing since I was 15. although feel I've most definitely started a whole new story. Older wiser and and mostly every thing I .. more..