Shameful

Why so hateful

It's so distasteful

We enable and

it's shameful

Its no fable

we are so unstable

We have thrown our halo

It's not okay though

We continue descending below

no longer defending our home

It's so hateful

so distasteful

we enable and

it's shameful

It's no fable

we remain low

it's so insane though

It's so bane. We're so vain. No!

Though The path. The path is shown

we proceed into the unknown

In disbelief, unrelieved. We reep what we sow

It's so hateful

So distasteful

We enable and

it's shameful

It's no fable

We're so ungrateful

and it's so painful

We descend below

No longer defend our home

Continue drifting from what's rightly known

We Remain alone

Maintain into the unknown

Insane we are though

We are bane. So vain. No!

Our brains we don't retain. We slow

And it's so. It's so hateful

so disgraceful and distasteful

We enable and it's shameful

We are unstable. We have thrown our halo

Jackie Gunnin

Feb 16th, 2017

Author's Note

Appreciate all viewers and all commentors who stop by and take the time to read my pieces:-)

Reviews

[SunnyDaze]

"we remain low
it's so insane though
It's so bane. We're so vain. No!

Though The path. The path is shown
we proceed into the unknown
In disbelief, unrelieved. We reep what we sow.

Descriptive depiction of our human ways, we surely are vain indeed. This is a masterful piece. Wonderful work!

[wordman]

reads like a song jackie !

[Jackie]

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