Under Attack

It is about letting go of the past. reuniting and fighting for one another. Not believing and reading into everything you read, see, and hear.

Their is no turning back

It is no use concerning that

No time to lose Under attack

This is the point of no return

To rejoice. Rejoin and learn

Use your voice and to be heard

It is a choice should not be deferred

Their is no turning back

No use concerning that

No time, no time to lose

This can not, can not be excused

This is freedom that they abuse

To believe them is hanging a noose

So if you see them, you must choose

Their is no, no turning back

It is no use concerning that

No time to lose under attack

Their is no returning

No use in concerning

Our time is burning

We continue deserting

We're not turning back

No use concerning that

No time to lose under attack

Jackie Gunnin

February 27th, 2017

Author's Note

Appreciate any and all comments.

Reviews

[boygene borice]

Very true. There is no reason being entangled within the past. You cant hold unto the past and expect to move forward...it only creates a blur

[iamshadowine]

oawhh! Niceeee! I really enjoyed reading this poem. I like how you rhymed the words without creating a mess, or just for the sake of rhyming!
great work!

keep writing :D

[wordman]

no turning back,no time to lose,sounds like todays world i think if you explained what your poem means in the box above you would get a lot more reviews

[Jackie]

In authors notes

[wordman]

it reads like part of the poem,you have to many views with no comments,,just saying..when a poem comes from your heart or mind we must convey to the reader where it came from

[Jackie]

I didn't change the phrases. Added some description to the 3.:-) that ks for stopping by and reading and commenting

[wordman]

i put it in my pocket,thanks