Bargain

Struggles with every day choices and and responsobilities

I've bargained for way more 

than i can bare to ignore. 

Can't hide behind closed doors. 

So much stress that continues to be stored

Not enough rest but plenty 

that upsets. Enough to be said 

that proceeds to keep the core fed

A sore head. All these requirements 

met and once we are near the end 

i am so anxious just to make it to bed

To close my eyes once again. 

Suppress the cries if only 

my mind Would shut off within

A sigh, a grin. If only it would all 

come to an end. To sleep. 

If only i could reap all the benefits 

of having peace inside my head

Without all the stress. The things that create a mess

upsets that i continue to obsess. I am blessed 

i have a life. A wife and kids who i am happy to be with

But sometimes i can't resist. I can't pretend 

or forget the troubles it comes with

June 24th, 2017

Jackie g

Author's Note

I appreciate anything i can get whether it be detailed constructive critiscism or just a simpe i love it. It was supurb. Whatever you got. Is good for me

Reviews

[wordman]

we all have that stress,but we have to move on

[Damien Ridge]

Seems like a lot of stress, and you expressed it well with your words. But there is that positivity at the end that shows that it's somehow all worth it. Though it is hard, you will continue to make it through kinda deal. Anyways thanks for sharing, was good.