Slip Away

Slip Away

A Poem by Jackie
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I feel so distant. I feel i'm slippin'. I feel alive, but like i'm driftin'

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 feel ashamed. I take the blame
I feel in flamed. stand in acid rain
I feel insane. These thoughts cannot be tamed
I feel enraged. While the human race sleeps in there cage
So much fueling all this rage. Standing on the outside 
of another s****y page. This is no phase. I'm stuck 
in black in grey. I feel so far. So far away.

I feel so distant. I feel I'm slippin' i feel alive 
but like I'm driftin'. Nobody gets it I feel. 
I feel so far away.
In this day in age i can not relate
I slip away. I slip away

I feel awake. I see things 
In a different way
A feel a quake. The surface below vibrates
I feel it shake And lose control. I see it all unravel
I see it all unfoldI feel all alone. I see you all
Walking into the unknown
I see it all. it's all wrong
I've seen it all along
Nobody know how to get along

I feel so distant. Feel like I'm slippin' i feel alive 
but like I'm driftin' nobody gets it.
I feel so. I feel so far away
In thidday in age i can't relate
I slip. I slip away

The more i store. The more in which i have to endure 
it weakens the core And i slip away. I slip. Further 
and further. I slip away

Sept 9th, 2017
Jackie Gunnin

© 2017 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
It's i feelin' i get. As if i am the only one who understand. Or very few who do but so far away

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I get a similar feeling sometimes. I'm sorry to hear you feel this way too. Beautiful poem, I feel I have much to learn from you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Jackie
Jackie

Eau claire, WI



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Hello folks I'm 27 Love all music, hardcore gamer, and avid writer. Been writing since I was 15. although feel I've most definitely started a whole new story. Older wiser and and mostly every thing I .. more..