Committed

I am commited. Outfitted with perssistance. 

We all learn the hard way without assistance. 

Without a helping hand. We all learn how to stand, 

how to be better men. I've become a better man. 

Part of our divine plan. It's our brilliance. 

To become more resilient to adjust to our conditions 

we are constantly being developed 

according to each addition. Each hardship we are given. 

I am confident. Dominant. I will take the reign. 

Will not slow down, i will continue to storm the way. 

We we're meant to overcome. Will your run

or ride into the sun

I am commited. Outfitted with persistence. 

I will give this my all. Feel my resistance. 

Feel my wrath. I continue to carve my own path. 

Won't stop believing i wont back down

but face my demons

Nov 11, 14th, 2017

Jackie gunnin

Author's Note

Any and all comments precise or concise are all apreciated. Tha ks again for your time

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Truth always out and you've certainly said how it is for you.. plus nudged thought into how life can be run to make things run smoothly as possible. Enjoyed the rap-like rhythm in your wriing.. good meter running start to finish. Great stuff. You need edit some spelling errors here and there.. but otherwise more than fine.

[wordman]

the only way to travel we learn the hard way