Gone so wrong

What have i done, where have i 

gone so wrong. It feels so numb. 

Hasn't been like this all along

I try my best, my damndest 

and for me to stay strong

But no matter what I'm struggling 

to keep it together. Of what i gather

I dont understand the content of the endeaver

Sometimes i think i would be better 

if i didn't bite off more than i could chew

But now what can i do. I mean, 

I could leave... 

But the truth is... It's just not me. Plus...

I couldn't breathe and with so many feats

I couldn't...I couldn't walk away with these challenges

The story would be incomplete. In other words

it would be absurd

So i suffer. My heart flutters. 

I will continue to uncover my truth. 

My wounds

So I will walk through the storm

Or even crawl considering it's form

I will fight to keep my head high

I will not lie, i will continue to try

And stay true to what i feel inside

I will not hide. I can not run away

I will keep writing till it's all okay

Dec 2nd, 2017

Jackie Gunnin

Author's Note

As i was saying previously. A lot went on yesterday. Hope y'all enjoy

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Second stanza... the transition from the first to second line is fucked.

I bet this would be awesome if you applied a little 'word economy' touch.

It reads too much like a broken up paragraph than a poem.

The intellectual content is totally fine; you just present it in a very generic way.

Please don't hate me for being critical. It's totally not personal. This is only one poem.

[Jackie]

Thanks man for the critical criticism!:-)