Revert

Revert

A Poem by Jackie
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I saw my 13 year old step daughter take her last breath on the 29th of last August and wrote a series of poems about it and her. Just deals with what I was experiencing and what it felt like going thr

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My mind reverts to those last breaths. 
That last expression...Implanted. 
I try to go back. Think of all the smiles 
and laughter we had. I try to remember that 

We're not here forever, 
I try to Remember she's much better. 
Finally unchained. She is still there 
just not how we remember

It is time i cut my losses and set free
All the pain and sadness it causes. 
It was never meant to be a simple process


Sept 2nd, 2018
Cj potts

© 2018 Jackie


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Jackie
Appteciate any any and all comments. Thanks again

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Bless you for expressing these honest, heartfelt sentiments and sharing them with us. I greatly empathize with you and wish you well in whatever pathways you may pursue towards peace, healing, etc.

Posted 4 Years Ago


i am truly sorry for your loss

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 22, 2018
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Jackie
Jackie

Eau claire, WI



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Hello folks I'm 27 Love all music, hardcore gamer, and avid writer. Been writing since I was 15. although feel I've most definitely started a whole new story. Older wiser and and mostly every thing I .. more..