Wildflowers

Your kisses covered me like wildflowers,
Persistent and bright and sweet.
You held me loosely,
As if your flowers would be crushed,
Their fragile beauty ravaged.
I knew they would eventually turn into weeds,
And then to choking, stinging dust,
But my arms clung to you anyway,
Wanting my body to be your garden.

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Good expression of fearing love, but still being lured into its passion
Very good ending.



I knew they would eventually turn into weeds,
And then to choking, stinging dust,
But my arms clung to you anyway,
Wanting my body to be your garden.



Nicely done

[Celtic Cat]

Wow. From tender to crushing in mere heartbeats. So very poignant and exceptionally well written... which I've come to expect from you!!! Love this piece.... it's taking my breath away... choking indeed!!

[Lyrical Love]

Your kisses covered me like wildflowers,
Persistent and bright and sweet.
These are pulsating lines here...
Lovely write!!!

[Ivory]

But my arms clung to you anyway,
Wanting my body to be your garden.
yes i like the ending here...
This was very good jax!!

[Silver_Moon]

Lustful.. Heheh!! "Wanting my body to be your garden" Nice line here. :D

Good work! :D

[Tammy]

I like this piece. Very nicely done.