Kat

My second little bonfire poem! This was written for my friend Kat who, along with her guitar, was the inspiration behind it.

A new-age 80's rocker--
Blonde flair like a fan draws the eye,
Silver ring grabs the ballad of songs and tunes,
Enchanted eyes catch the passerby.

 

Kind words are the tonic of fashion,
Watch ash and spark on the fly,
But no song can heal the broken night,
As dawn cracks the open sky.

Author's Note

This was really written around a true-blazing bonfire, so spare me the detailed analysis if you don't mind!

Reviews

[THE BLACK SEAL]

nicely done

[xlynne]

seems like a poem written around friends, meaning that its so carefree and light. great poem!

[Jessica L Auster]

I liked this very much. Keep it up!