Barbecue

Barbecue

A Poem by Jaden Larker
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Wrote this whilst taking a walk and happened upon a familiar smell.

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Afternoon breeze

Carries smells of barbecue

Summers scent

© 2012 Jaden Larker


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I could almost TASTE it! Oh, such a sweet, sweet aroma!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Jaden Larker

13 Years Ago

Thanks, your comment helped me improve this!
Dean Kuch®

13 Years Ago

Glad I could help. I really liked it just as it was written though...
Jaden Larker

13 Years Ago

Hmm, I'm not sure at the moment. Think I'll change it back for now and give it some thought.

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Added on June 30, 2012
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Jaden Larker
Jaden Larker

West Midlands, United Kingdom



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I am a Poet from a small town you've never heard of. Here I will share my haiku, senryu, tanka & more traditional poetry. NOTE: It is a widely viewed misconception that haiku must follow the format.. more..