My evening Prayer.

My God. My Saviour. My Best Friend.

Please help me get through this you know that I can.

Look after all of those who don’t know who you are.

I love you my father, I’ll love you forever.

Please forgive my many mistakes,

Please help me to guide others to do your will.

Goodnight My Heavenly Father,

I’ll talk to you soon; it’s time for me to sleep now,

Goodnight and amen.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice prayer. Thank you for sharing. :)

[shunik]

sweet from the heart
=]

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Loevly, devoted and innocent prayer to God! We often have to ask Him to forgive us and to guide us in life, then we would be changed really much! Thanks for sharing!

[Angelic Surrender]

AWESOME!! I love it :) Great work and great prayer. I like how you talk intimately as if he really was your best friend. We all need that. Great work ^_^

[S. Michael Long]

looove it.. i would say... change "you know that i can" to "You Told Me I Can" and, "look after those, Who Want to Know Who You Are" Change you will love Him forever to "You'll, love me forever" Now, this is my own personal influence, so take it or leave it, but i would say in the 6th stanza, (so take anything i said and use or leave it, im just reviewing here (:) Use the name Lord, to define where you are going in the 6th, maybe something like this.. : Lord, help me guide others, and make mine Your will, anyhow, nice write! loved it -s

[Melati]

I love this! :)

[Chantel]

I love it, and thank you for being bold enough to post this!

[Octob3r Star]

ppprrraaaiiissseee ; )

[Sleeping Maiden]

Hmmm, nice.. wonderful prayer. =)

[zero binty]

Everybody needs something to believe in. Deity, nature, or themselves. I like this piece on a take that rarely gets touched upon unless it is that certain poet who is trying to blend religion and science.