Love War.

It's hard to imagine a life without love.

Hard to picture a world with only hate.

We're already surrounded,there's no easy escape,

We can't let it win,  we must remain strong.

But love is no factor, when it comes to the war.

Reviews

[Who Cares]

The poem was great until the last line, it just didnt flow with the rest of the poem. I like the concept and I like your train of thought. The last line is powerful and would work well in another piece. " All is fair in love and war" We cannot possibly ever love if we have never hated. They are opposites and in order to have one you have to witness the other. " There is a fine line between love and hate" Sometimes you love so much you begin to hate and on the other side if you hate for so long you secretly love.

[Becky Clancy]

I really like this poem, it was short and to the point ^^ plus it is so true

[Meghan]

Such truth in this piece. I love the shortness of it. You let the words speak for themselves and get your message out effectively! Nice job!

[Morrigan Nicole]

again, you speak the absolute truth.

[Thea]

Simple yet so truthful...Great job...
:)))

[♋ Iris ♋]

The meaning behind this is a strong one. Great poem

[AK]

Nice concept to write on. Personally I would think it would be nice if you could make the poem a longer. It would make t a lot more strong. I found the flow and syllables in the the poem a bit, weird?
The syllables are 10-10-13-10-12 and that considerably breaks the flow of the poem along with the rhyming scheme. The rhyming scheme is neither rhyming nor not rhyming. The last words like 'strong' and 'war' sound similar just like 'hate' and 'escape'. Please, I hope I'm not being very rude. I'm just trying to help. Thanks for the poem-
Akanksha Suresh

[Lowesy]

Really good, good logic and well written! No quarrels with this one!

[BS Johnson]

In order to know one, you must know the other. They are close to another, yet very far apart. Good write, but a bit confusing of the two at times, but then, they always are.

[patricia]

I like the contradictory title, and the way you express the future fear, whilst in the middle of the struggle, trying to be brave in the face of adversity. Thankyou.