HATE

I hate being scared.

I hate not knowing.

I hate being unprepared.

I hate feeling alone

I hate it when you aren’t there.

I hate not wanting to go home.

I hate not going anywhere

I hate who I am

I hate being me

I hate not having a friend

I hate it all can’t you see?

Reviews

[S. Michael Long]

yeah! yeah! this is nice (: the only thing i can be a critic about is, how you wrote, i hate being alone and hate not wanting to go home, put them together so it reads congruently. you should use the rhyme one after another so its near the middle since you don't emphasize rhyme in the whole poem. put the end rhyme verses one after another (put them in the middle) and leave the others alone. this poem needs to come to a point, (meaning it needs to be sharper) you can use the "home" and "alone" rhyme to sharpen the edge of the poem if you put them together (: you are a great writer! -s

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I hate those things too, but hate is something like love, it's like some instinct that doesn't always work out. I like the bold fond of the h word though, nice use of repetition. It has a lot of power.

[Legion]

The hardest thing to do is to love. Hate is to easy. Embrace those things and understand them. Eventually you will no longer hate.

[Eileen]

I love these kinds of poems. It's not too much and I love the emphasis on the main word.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The repitition reels form the screen, well done, good read.

[Richy Moon]

Nice, This one is just beutiful in its own way

[Rhea752]

that was very relate able i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[These Haunted Hallways]

Wow, this was really good here. We all feel like this many of times. Life has its tricky and hard moments. It's tuff to get up and dust yourself off once in awhile, but we must in order to move on. One day at a time tho. I felt everything here, great job!! :)

[Rene Velez]

yes i do, a bit depressing i would say for someone so young...you are complicated, lol

[R J Askew]

I hate hate is the best one. Then you defuse the hate and none of it matters!