Just Be

At last, a poem that is not to, from, or because of anyone.......yet :)

 

Will you?

 Will you?

 

Find me

 

Hug me

 

Kiss me

 

Love me?

 

 

Will you?

 

Touch me

 

Feel me

 

Hold me

 

See me?

 

 

Will you?

 Will you?

 

Set me free...

 

 

Will you?

 Will you?

 

Have me

 

Steal me

 

Save me

 

Kill me?

 

 

Will you?

 Will you?

 

Use the key...

 

 

Will you?

 Will you?

 

Surprise me

 

Sensitize me

 

Capsize me

 

Analyze me?

 

 

Will you?

 Will you?

 

Look for me...

 

 

Will you?

 Will you?

 

Fly

 

Try

 

Sigh

 

For me?

 

 

Will you?

 Will you?

 

Just be…?

Author's Note

I thought of the first part literally out of NOWHERE.... I was just editing an essay for school, and there those lines just flew right into my head, and the rest not long afterwards.
Its funny how the mind works sometimes.... This poem doesnt flow in quite the way I want it to, but its like a few others Ive written - like I wrote it a thousand times already... so it clearly must have been in the back of my mind for a long time.

Reviews

[Jon Gary Frost]

I enjoyed this. It was a stream of conscious style that wasn't too heavy or confusing. The meaning and message was simple, but honest. You expressed a longing and confusion towards love that I think we all fell.

Nicely captured!!

[Alexander Fox]

Can i buy tickets to the back of your mind, because some really great and random poetry apparently hangsout there?