I'd Live

Sad times, we all have them :(

 

“I don’t want to hurt you.” is a silly thing to say,

I heard it twice before, and then?

Well it happens, either way…

 

“Will you be okay?” well yes, I’d live…

I’d still breathe and my heart would still beat.

Anyone would say I was still on my feet.

 

Don’t ask me, and don’t say sorry…

I’m not a machine, or a doll,

I don’t have pixie-dust to shake off,

Do you think I’ve never cried at all?

 

Are you through?

I can’t read your eyes…

Am I losing you?

Am I losing you too??

 

Author's Note

Sloppy, unfinished. Whatever.

Reviews

[Alexander Fox]

Needs flesh. Feels like the beginnings of a very true and deep poem, much like my latest, just not enough there yet...

[Lunar Lightning]

Very nicelly done. I think a simple change here or there would make it that much better, but still. Great idea that you could so easily expand off of.

Luna

[TheKaylaPup]

I like the idea behind it. I think if you made of few changes it could be really great.