Ridiculous Heart

In Haiku format

Dear, I don’t love you.

And you don’t love me either.

I see no future.

 

Oh, but shouldn’t I?

Thought I’d be a fool not to.

Logic plays no part.

 

You are perfection.

Couldn’t find a flaw in you.

A dream that’s alive.

 

But you are not mine.

Perfect kisses, perfect touch.

You’re not what I want.

 

My dear, there’s no love.

My heart is cold, eyes are dry.

No fire inside.

 

I should miss you more.

I stumbled and now moved on.

Ridiculous heart.

 

Author's Note

Okay so Ive finally admitted to myself that my brain has no say in the matter. Its a very annoying realization, and promises heartbreak in the future...

Reviews

[Alexander Fox]

Haiku? But I like it. You know my opinion on poems without a basic rhyme pattern, but I really enjoyed this poem. And i understand the emotions very very well. great work.

[celyn]

I like the haiku style,
and I love the title and the last line.
Great poem. :)

[Looouise]

I really liked that.
I've never seen a haiku poem that long, but I thought it was really well done.