I Don't Know Why
A Poem by Phoenix
I think of you
how you’re so kind
It makes me cry
It makes me cry
I know that now
you’re on my mind
All of the time
All of the time
I feel your heart
beat next to mine
It makes me sigh
It makes me sigh
Those blue eyes
put tears in mine
I don’t know why
I don’t know why
© 2010 Phoenix
Author's Note
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Strangly the inspiration for this hit during a Norah Jones concert. Well maybe that's not so strange...
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I like it. Its simple but complete. Also it has a good rhyme pattern and flow. I also like how the crying from stanza one shows up again in a different way in the last stanza. Most of the time things like that seem redundant but it doesn't in this poem.
Posted 15 Years Ago
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Added on April 25, 2010
Last Updated on April 25, 2010
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PhoenixZushi, Japan
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I have so many ideas and feelings, and they usually buzz around inside me wildly. When I can gather up enough of them, then a piece of writing emerges and I feel refreshed. more..
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