Stranger

Such lovely, honest men...

Not sure what my memories mean

if they’re still good, or bad, or real

if they’re still what they seemed.

 

You looked at me without a sound

you seemed sad and confused

but you’re a stranger to me now.

 

You’re a different kind of man

I don’t know you anymore

I don’t think I ever can.

 

There was a lie under your frown

hidden all this time

but you’re a danger to me now.

Author's Note

Two lines from this I got from the song "Beautiful Calm Driving" by Sia. I think the song explains much better how I really feel...

Reviews

[See ya]

Cool. Subtle but powerful. I felt like the man you were writing that about and thats gotta be real cool for you. Your words cut me....in a good way.

[cfix]

I really like the words. This is wonderful.
Very well written!

[Alicia Schroeder]

Amazing peice

[Alexander Fox]

I like the ending. There is nothing worse then realizing that someone you wanted ended up dangerous to you, and it is an idea that doesn't get mentioned enough.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Well, this is kind of cool. Wonderful flow, and you managed to reflect your feelings nearly perfectly. Not only that, I'm pretty sure you've related to everyone who's ever went through a bad break-up. :p Thanks for sharing. :)

Eternally Yours, Blade 3 Blood