For Once...

Written in haiku format

I felt you let go
I felt the want inside you
I felt you forget

You forgot your fear
You forgot anxiety
You forgot pressure

No surroundings left
No time, no darkness, no sound
There was only me

It was pure feeling
That night, we found the whole world
Just in each other

Author's Note

To have this back again........!!!
And folks, it was only kissing. If you reach these feelings then it can really be enough sometimes....

Reviews

[Amy D. Brooks]

Man, I love this one! Such a good summation of physical chemistry. I guess it could just be kissing, but it is so powerful! Really good!

[Alexander Fox]

On my second read......this might also apply to a late night talk among long time friends in privacy.

[Alexander Fox]

Really now? Who were you just kissing that overcame you so?