Just saying

short and sweet, I do this when i cant think of anything to write....i just rhyme.

Tick tock, I’m stuck with a writers block, s**t sucks….but here goes my attempt flows, aiming to knock with huge blows to end my writer woes. I want my words to jump off the page instead of my bottled up rage but my memory keeps it locked in a cage possibly afraid to show how I’m damage like a savage with no language, I hope this doesn’t become a habit, I can’t stand it!…..I think I’m done saying anymore, I’ll let the pen and paper settle the score. :::drops the mic::: sometimes I wish I was that tyght! 

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

love the poem, nice and raw

I'm new on here, and it would be such an honour if you can review some of my poems as well!

[aLittlePain]

Kick a*s pace! Gritty hip hop feel! Sublime verse and rhyme. R x

[Gee]

Reads like a rap, was that your intention. Whatever, I enjoyed reading

[JainieJane]

Thanks....well my thoughts rhyme alot and I do listen to hip hop so I guess my thoughts are influenced by it.