How

How

A Poem by Jakobe
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None today

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"How do You feel about this one?" I dont want to say I hate it because its too close to a person. But, I do Hate it. Does that make sense? " I hear you, now how about this one here?" I dont understand it. what is it? " Its ok not a lot of people do, but my job is easier if we leave it there, Sounds good with you?" ... I guess so. whats the next question? " Enough with the photos lets switch topics, hmm, Oh. Wow, Ok well looks like you scored pretty high on this one. Do you wanna talk about why you felt this way?" Thats gotta be a trick question, will us talking about it help at all? " Sure it will! And you arent the only one who comes here with the problems you have you know. If you want we could get you set up in a group session and hopefully get you paird up with someone." Doesnt the group thing cost more? "Yes it does and I remember what you told me about your job thing, but I feel like this has many benifits for you other than escaping Lo.. well along with allowing you to meet new like minded people." I feel you. " Well dont feel rushed, altho this is the last seassion that that you paid for and I havent been seeing you making much progress, I want to help you out." Ok. " Alright we should close up here, my next client usually comes in early and me and you already finished our checklist, Have a good day." 

© 2025 Jakobe


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Your grammar and diction are excellent
Structure could use some work
Is there something that you are trying to express here other than stasis and frustration?

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fishysua

5 Months Ago

Well, good job.
What is it that you want from your audience? Are you even aware that you hav.. read more
Jakobe

5 Months Ago

lol no not really but I do want to be a better writer and I know feedback and practice is how I will.. read more
Fishysua

5 Months Ago

Very well, good luck, and keep at it

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Added on May 19, 2025
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Jakobe
Jakobe

Waldorf, MD



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Im 20 and new to writing. I needed a something to express my mind, Im not too good at drawing or making music or animations but I do find enjoyment in writing things. Its like my mind connects to the .. more..