The Cellar

And opening based on a picture I was given in English Image not one based on.

A light blinked into life, illuminating a small patch of the dark room. It shone on a set of damp shoes. It shone on the smart suit of the man holding the lamp. And it shone on the sacks piled at the bottom of the steps...

 

Author's Note

short. It's only an opening...Maybe I could make a novel out of it...No
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Reviews

[Mrs.Lovett]

Nice. Keep it up i wanna read more from you!

[Tucker]

I love this idea you have of making opening scenes or stories from pictures. It's a really unique idea. Also, the starting to this one is very intriguing, I'd love to see where it goes.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I think you should continue and make it a good short story because the beginning is enticing.