Burning Desire

A Poem by HopingStrong

Simple poem about desiring a woman.

Words melt her cold heart

A burning in her eyes

If a touch could ignite mine

Hers is the desire

Books in the fire

The pages unwritten

A spoken word, spoken first

Bathe in the image

Painted with limits

No stains in the linen

A fresh start, this spark

Blazing a finish

Words melt her cold heart

Burning with desire

If a touch could ignite mine

Hers I'd require

-HopingStrong

© 2015 HopingStrong

Author's Note

Another quick poem I made at work, day dreaming about that spark...

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R Smith

a fine poem full of passion and desire, the flow is great and the rhymes come out of nowhere which is great, you have much promise my friend, i'm sure there's so much more to come :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Much thanks, and indeed there will!

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Added on March 25, 2015
Last Updated on March 25, 2015

Author

HopingStrong

New Brunswick, Canada

About

I'm a man that has won. A man that has lost. A loss of the one not the plan, but a cost. The cause of the damage, the hammering thoughts. I stop. And write what I'm thinking. That's all. more..