Inspiration (10w)

Thanks for the inspiration

To be Inspired
By a Friend
Is the greatest Gift

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your lune (5 - 3 - 5) is perfectly & succinctly stated. For me, the reverse is my greatest gift . . . when I find out I've inspired someone to write a spectacular poem, such as the one Samuel Dickens wrote yesterday (Hair on a G-string) after reading my guitar poem (Only a Reverie). Money cannot compare with such a treat!

[James]

Thank you. The 5-3-5 was a total accident. I think these little 10 word poems are so cool I had to try one. Like you, though I would love to inspire someone they way they have me. Maybe one day.

[barleygirl]

I often miss things in my own poems . . . until some reviewer points it out! I thought you didn't notice this is structured like a lune! (((HUGS)))

[Shabeeh Haider]

Agreed. Though it is just as much fun when it is the other way round.

[James]

Yes it is, but I was inspired to write this one by a good friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is! i second that emotion, as Smokey would sing.

[James]

I am glad you agree.

Thank you Jacob.