Love's Flight...

My soaring heart...

Love's Flight...

It is a gorgeous morning,
and the birds of the sky are singing,
preparing themselves to embark on a,
masterful journey into the great unknown,

My beautiful feathered friends, will be in search
for food and shelter, and my heart will be a tag along,
scavenging for love,

I will need to adopt some of their keen senses
their eyesight, they use to navigate there flight,
and find food and shelter, I will need to use open eyes
to spot my future wife,

I will also need their, drive and determination
they use to weather any storm, wind, or obstacles,
I will use to stay the course, never giving up no matter the,
trail or tribulations,

I will allow these amazing animals to teach me,
a little about themselves, as I too learn more about
myself,

When the day comes to an end, I pray that my friends
of flight, will endure the day with ease and find all the,
necessities needed to live comfortably,
and I too able to find that ever evasive love,

Love is not just something my heart desires,
Love is a something my heart absolutely needs,
and my heart will be soaring far and wide until,
I find it,

Today is the beginning of
Love's Flight...

Author's Note

God is good!!!

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Love can not be found while we search for it.Love has to find us that's why we are called to serve the Lord God first then all other needs will be met in His perfect time nice write Jamestown

Bill

[Jamestown]

Yes yes and yes and yes u right

[W R Stowe]

Amen to God being first

[success]

let your love fly..lolz....interesting poem

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hopeful and strong words for love. I tell people.Don't rush love. Love comes when it support to.
"Love is not just something my heart desires,
Love is a something my heart absolutely needs,
and my heart will be soaring far and wide until,
I find it, "
When you find love. You will know it. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing poetry forlove.
Coyote

[Jamestown]

I agree with your review completely! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I think we all need love, James. Living in a world without love, is living alone and lonely, it's always cold without any love. I liked your poem a lot. :) Rudi

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! PTL

[Mai L Nissen]

A most enjoyable read, JT! Love the concept...
I like the oxymoron in this description : "scavenging for love,"

This is my favourite stanza:
"When the day comes to an end, I pray that my friends
of flight, will endure the day with ease and find all the,
necessities needed to live comfortably,
and I too able to find that ever evasive love, "
- Beautifully written!

You finish strong: "Today is the beginning of
Love's Flight... " this is great! This is one of my new favourites of yours :)
Thanks for sharing!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review!
I always look forward to reading what my talented friend,
thinks of my work, b-blessed!

[Mai L Nissen]

Well, if we are talking about me, then I can say: She LOVED it! :)

[child of God]

This is a beautiful peice my freind :) I love your work more and more by the day

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Spirit]

I really, really, really love this piece. Thank you for pouring your heart out to us all!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, I appreciate it, b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

I love this man, keep it going...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[armin]

really an uplifting piece, nice use of imagery.
I enjoyed the read.
Well done.

armin. ...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[ANTO]

JT this has many admirable qualities - let me get rid of the criticisms first. I think you use commas too liberally. I think animals should be changed to creatures but wait...on researching that Im wrong lol!! Birds ARE animals, who knew lol?

So the good points - the concept is brilliant; becoming bird like to find 'The One'.
I really liked this stanza -
"When the day comes to an end, I pray that my friends
of flight, will endure the day with ease and find all the,
necessities needed to live comfortably,
and I too able to find that ever evasive love..."

The last three stanzas are a beautiful way to round off and the final two lines are knockout !
Your best yet, I feel.
Bravo

[Jamestown]

Thanks, for, checking, it, out, and, your, kind, review!
I, appreciate, it, lol:) b-blessed!

[ANTO]

Not a new big bag of commas - oh we are all doomed !! lol
:)

[Jamestown]

I thought you may like that, he, he!

[ANTO]

Nice one JT, xD