If I could I would...

But I know who can:)

If I could...

If I could take every ounce of pain away,
If I could make everyday a day in heaven,
If I could answer all of your prayers,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If I could make you understand that his eyes
are always on you the sun and moon,
If I could die for you to make sure you have eternal life,
If I could guide you to paradise,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If I could make all your wrongs right,
If I could bring light to your dark nights,
If I could make you experience perfection,

You know I would but I can't,
although I do know who can,

If you want his number,
it's 1- 800 THE LIFE
he's been longing for your call...

Author's Note

GOD IS GOOD!

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Nice poem James your faith speaks loudly in every line God bless

Bill

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[W R Stowe]

you're very welcome

[sereenaoutloud]

Your faith and big heart show through in this write James, such a beautiful message.
Love reading your work.. it always leaves me with hope! :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[SmittyJas]

Faith strength in numbers Our Lord is a blessing to us all give him the praise give him that call. Love you Brother James your message never changes and that's great by me.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Chris]

we find strength to persevere in our faiths...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Great write man, everyone should know where to turn when they feel like they can't turn to anyone else...

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[GreenEyedPoet]

God is good. :D
Awesome write with a great message James!

[Jamestown]

All the time! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[R Smith]

well said James, you express the way ahead so very well, great poem :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[ANTO]

Witty play on modern themes and methodologies of reaching a consumerised population here JT. Its thinkers like you that the church needs to reach out to younger people, I feel. The old guard has failed. Time for root and branch revolution.
Kudos.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[B]

Loving someone can make us want to do it all
To elevate them out of any hell

But you know it never works
We gotta wait till they get up and join LIFE
and be so free and happy

Love your sense of sentiment and warm heart James
You always write so warmly :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Chirag Kumar]

Nicely written brother. The way you express your thoughts with such simplicity is great. Loved it :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!