Freshly scrubbed floor

 

Freshly scrubbed floor

 

Okay, so this the deal

No dragging chairs across me

No jumping up and down

No cats scratching on me

 

I’m gleaming you see

All polished and shining

No dust on me now

I look great I know

 

I smell so fresh

Been scrubbed with fair hands

Lovingly restored

To my former self

Thank you.

Reviews

[Mary]

respect da floor! Well done! If a floor could feel (and what proof is there it doesn't?), this might be what it would say. :-)

[TSanders]

I love it. Clever and creative. A new perspective.

[Linear]

Thats the first time the floor talked to me, next time I will take my shoes off


Great work, well thought out, unique

[Revolutionary]

love it leave that floor alone to enjoy the feeling of clean.great imagry

[CalebSchadeck]

haha great idea good poem

[Pickleby Davies]

Lol I love this poem! Really cute and funny. Terrific idea.

[Aimee Mahathy]

Haha, great personification!

[Mauricio Montoya]

So clean I could eat off it! “But then the floor might get up set”
You think?

[KAREN]

You know I bet floors does say that if they could talk!! Love it!!

[E.H. Monroe]

The personification works nicely. This remind me of childhood exercises in eng lit class.