Sun

Haiku

Sun

 

Sunshine beams on me

The heat is quite amazing

I love the feeling.

Reviews

[KAREN]

I can relate to this! Makes me want lay out in the warmth of the sun! Short but full of meaning!

[Joshua Smit]

i once made an attempt at an haiku... found the length to be insufficient to express myself with tho... pretty good!

[Sweets]

Short and simple :)
Great one! :D

[Goodbye]

Quite Lovely...I would just use a little darker color, as it was hard for my middle-aged eyes to see...

[sarah]

awsome haiku

[Wondering Mind]

HighQ! I love them, and this one too

[Light]

a wonderful Haiku! beautifully written!

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you captured the essense in three lines well done

[justice]

Yay haiku!! I really like haikus. They are a fun constraint that test a writer's ability. This is a very well executed haiku that is very effective for both author and reader alike. Thank you for sharing it!

[Marie Harrison]

Sheading light on my stress filled day. Thank you for sharing.