Birds

Haiku.

Birds

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Birds fly by in flocks

Wings outstretched, playing on the wind

Beauty in the sky.

Reviews

[Archia]

I love the beauty of freedom that birds have, which this haiku brings through, and that really comes through in the last line.

[Rossen]

No need for the photo, you have painted the image with a few strokes!

[Chelsea]

Cool! I'm a fan of Haiku. I love simple poems like this. You captured the beauty of birds for sure! You painted a vivid picture of the birds flying through the gorgeous sky! Well done!

[Aimee Mahathy]

Really simple, but still wonderful. Much like birds themselves. :3

[Linear]

Birds soar to the places we would love to be, beautiful poetry in form

[Nights Tale]

Its good xNTx

[Valentine]

Very nicely done..I am not so hot on this type of poem..but you did splendly..lol and God blesss..Valentine

[Cynthia]

Simple, yet very beautiful!
You have a nice desription on the birds,
you did a great jon on desribing the nature!