Letting go

Letting go

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now I have let you go

I watch you from afar

A smile on your face

A twinkle in your eye

 

Back to the person you once were

It was hard to let us go

So pleased you’re happy now

We can both be happy once again

 

We had a long history

Happy days, and sad ones too

The memories will never go

I will never stop loving you

 

Individuals are we now

You’ll always have a place in my heart

Goodbye my lover

Hello my friend..

Reviews

[Katannaism]

This is just beautiful- It was so moving and amazing.. It is extremely hard to let someone you love go-
This is amazing work-Well done!

[Joshua Smit]

very well done :D

[KAREN]

Good up beat write, because once lovers and now friends is always a plus! Excellent!

[Shardbearer99]

A very intimate telling of the difficult of letting one's lover go. It is very hard to remain friends with someone you've been emotionally involved with for long periods of time. Great work

[An owl on the moon]

Though your final lines seem to offer that hope of friendship, this one made me ache... Letting go, or trying to... it's so hard, and sometimes those cuts never quite heal... Beautifully expressed with tenderness.

[Moflo]

Well, basically this describes exactly how I feel right now towards someone so very nice write. Good display of emotion. Nice work.

[Linear]

Great work, I myself lost both, but i needed the friend, guess it was to painful

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what a lovely sentiment..sometimes we get lost in another person..and lost the essense of ourselves..