Let's try again

Let’s try again

  

Many months have gone by

Months of happiness

Months of sadness

Months of pain

 

The love I feel for you is immense

Overpowering my thoughts

I can hardly function

All I think about is you

 

The memories

Hours spent laughing

Days spent in your arms

Months spent in love

 

We have had difficult times

Times of heartache

Times with tears

Times of frustration

 

I welcome you now with open arms

Back into my life

To fill my heart with joy

To spend our lives together

 

You are my world

My other half

My soul mate

You are my everything, let’s try again.. J

 

 

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

simply wonderful! beautiful and I feel all words in this sweet love-poem..but also feel sadness...
~nia~

[Joshua Smit]

very open and emotional, it uses such simple strait forward wording and that allows your feelings to shine through in quite an amazing way :)

[Katannaism]

The emotion in this speaks volumes. It's also nice and straightforward. I liked it. Good work!

[Mauricio Montoya]

love how itcomes together, nice work.

[KAREN]

Very sweet! I can feel the longing of wanting to try again, the love is felt too! Nicely penned!

[Jazique]

Awe so sweet. To have another chance at love or something you think worth doing again. Either way it was so nice whether it was based off your life or not well done it had a wonderful flow and everything.

[Sweets]

Loved the last stanza, such a sweet dedication :)

[maddie]

I liked this. It's relateable, very well writin.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

A very good poem about reconciliation.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

"Let's try again", if only most thoguh on these lines, we truly would be better people, well done, a great read.