Torn

Torn

A Poem by ..R.I.P..

"Torn"

 

I'm torn

Torn between choices

I'm torn

Torn between life and death

I'm torn

Torn between love and pain

I'm torn

Torn between you and suffering

© 2009 ..R.I.P..


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Very nicely said. I liked the style, too. Although I really do think it might be better with one more "I'm torn" at the end, but that might just be me. Nice poem. I think you might enjoy my poem "Here I Am".

Posted 16 Years Ago
This is raw, and very heartfelt.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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 Added on May 31, 2009

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..R.I.P..
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I have another account on here. I had lost my login stuff for this one and had set up a new one. Then found the stuff to this one. Anyways..follow me on Tumblr! I keep all my new poems on there! I'll .. more..