Too Perfect

I wrote this a while back about someone I thought i loved.

You are everything I've ever wanted

You shine with a light of your own

You make the world a brighter place

But you're too perfect

Too perfect to be real

But too real to be fake

You're too perfect for me

Reviews

[Kira]

Sigh...

I'm thinking about someone I thought was perfect, actually...

*starts bawling uncontrollably and can barely find the submit button*

[John A Common]

I really like this one. I feel this way about my wife. I like the way that you pack so much power into short strong poems. You can say in a paragraph what most people cant say in a book. You are very talented,I'm glad I found your poems.