Fade Away

This is recent, and yet it isn't.

When you walked out

I told you to never come back

But every day since

You've been there, in my mind

My heart aches and trys to hold on

While my memories fade away

 

But when you want back in

I tell you no

When I know I love you

And every day since

You've been there, in my mind

My heart aches and trys to hold on

As my love begins to fade away

 

You tried to make me see

But I'm blind to your lies

And yet, every day

You're there, in my mind

My heart aches and trys to hold on

But there's nothing to hold onto

Reviews

[Pikachu]

Wow that's like not only my story but the typical love gone wrong story. Where you spill your heart to a very special person. Do everything to keep the feeling alive willing to risk everything to keep the other person happy and safe. To me a relationship that's been fought for to stay alive is valuable. Yet the other person killed it over the simplest thing. You stand there still caring trying to hang on. But that persons not there anymore. You're just in an endless battle and even if you survive there's nothing else left to win.

I LOVE this poem. Because I can really relate to it, in a way. You think that you don't want someone, and push them away. But then suddenly you wake up one day and realize that you DO want them. But then it's too late.
Or you might just get lucky, like I did.

"You've been there, in my mind" My favorite line.

[deeps]

I know this feeling all to well
So i like how this write came togther
it flowed wonderful with emotion.
well written and well expressed.