Guardian Angel

Just some random thought that ran through my head.

 

 

I took my own life

 And got banished to hell

But instead of a demon,

An angel appeared...

And with that angel

Came a ray of hope

Because that angel

Was my Guardian...

With no demons in sight,

And just this one angel

I took his hand to stand...

My Guardian Angel,

Always watching over me...

...even in hell...

 

 

 

Author's Note

Revised, with a new flow. Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[ruth]

i like how your Guadian Angel is with you.."even in hell"
-ruth

[E-man]

yeah it sounds really good like this but I can see like its a great place to start some kind of long poem with a story to it, but if you do that sometimes you lose the feel but you should give it a try and see how that turns out

[Tallulah]

I like it. Very short but it makes you think which is good. I think you can expand on it some but it isn't necessary.