Your Smile

This happened the other day, I walked into McDonalds and my friend works there, he looked so miserable when I saw him...until he saw me.(note: he is like a brother to me, but I might be more to him.)

You were so unhappy

A frown was painted

On your beautiful face

My heart broke

When I saw that frown

But then you saw me

And your beautiful smile

Replaced that cold frown

And your whole face lit up

Your smile was brilliant

And it made my heart whole

Your smile is like a drug to me

 

 

Reviews

[LostInWonderland2014]

awwwwwwwwww!
Soo sweet!
I love all your poem!
Their amazine and you are amazine too!
Its wonderful!

[Pikachu]

Shhh the power of a smile. It brings joy beyond understanding. No matter the agony life brings along a single smile brightens the darkness enough to get you out of the dark. Short yet great peace of writing

[PaperHearts]

Your poem certainly made me smile!
I could totally relate to the feeling, and it made me remember many moments like this!
=]
~PaperHearts

There's rarely anything better than making someone else feel good. On top of the world, even.
I like how you didn't attempt to make it rhyme or anything. Pure, honest, straight from the heart.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

What a wonderful poem and yes smiles are good to see.
Great Job

[mmzx]

wow. you sure light up his life.
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