I'm imagining what life could be

I'm imagining what life could be with him........

I'm imagining what life could be

If the sun never shined

I'm imagining what life could be

If we never laughed

I'm imagining what life could be

If we never smiled

I'm imagining what life could be

If there was no good or evil

I'm imagining what life would be

If everything was in black and white

I'm imagining what life could be

If I could erase the past

I'm imagining what life could be

If we had never met

I'm imagining what life could be with you..... 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think..

Reviews

[BULLET FOR MY VALENTINE]

A subtle way of looking at life from an idealistic view point, we don't know how bad life can get until we reach the bottom of the barrel and if we think by ending it ourselves and the nightmare will be vanished then our own demise is only the beginning of an endless hell of torment and suffering, yes nothing is perfect and i think we can all feel regret at times that in hindsight we may have chosen different routes but we have to live with our choices,nice poem it has inspired me on a dark dreary day.

[Michael X]

when meeting someone creates a lonely spark, a spark that starts the unexplainable, the unexaplainable
growing with every beat of the heart, slowly building itself into a fire,
the yearning to feel a lover's embrace; yet small- the passionate flame is at first light desire
set as the mission reaching toward the heavens rendered by intentions of wanting ( from the heart)
to crave the unkown, the what ifs, to seek what it means to believe,
to search for the door that opens up to a caring dream that shares itself as love~
janik this is beautifully heartfelt and sweet and reads as a gentle poem of innocence and wonder

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think this is certainly what many of us go through when a relationship ends... the first part certainly shows how you can feel after the breakup, its almost as joy doesn't exist...

I'm imagining what life could be
If I could erase the past

all i got to say is it partially would be nice but then again if we don't try we don't grow so it is a catch twenty-two... but I certainly know the feeling.

[Luther]

this is really nice writing. really enjoyed reading.
i think in my experience of poetry i have come across every one of these thoughts, but you have managed to entwine them all in this beautiful piece.
i'm hoping that you found whoever that 'you' was!
thanks for sharing
xxx

[Special]

Seems awesome enough, though it sounds like you wonder a lot.

I sense some wonder, curiosity, and even dread.
It seems like you're a bit unsure about your next step.