I Knew

I knew that sooner or later

I'd throw my life away.....

I knew that sooner or later

I'd come to the end of the road.....

I knew that sooner or later

The answers wouldn't be quite clear.....

I knew that sooner would come before later.....

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Joel Alvarado]

This piece has a great sense of wisdom in it, though it is very simply for any reader to understand and comprehend. Nice job.

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damn.. sometimes i feel like this...guess alot of us feel these feelings...great write..

[Nick Almanza]

great write like always. . has the feeling like your at the end and theres nothing you can do to stop it. . i feel the same way sometimes. .well most of the time. . n yeah good poem!

[PaperHearts]

Hmmm, it was a rather intriguing poem. The emotion of it definitely came through in the piece. I thought the ending was great, and the elipses were also really effective in capturing the emotion.
It was a feeling that I could relate to...a feeling that I've strongly been connected to in the past...But just remember, that life is never as bad as it seems! Never.
~PaperHearts

I agree with Stussy. Something's clearly been bothering you lately.
You've captured that sort of feeling of impending doom, and then regret when it all comes crashing down on you.

[John Stussy]

Dismal, to the point, and fits the mood you've had lately. Try to stay optimistic though? Things in life may be bad but there's always something positive somewhere.