White Frosted Hills

This goes out to Anne......she was like family and I'll grieve her death for a long time to come......

Dragging you down

Those white frosted hills

 

 

 

Death embraces it's kill

Holding you tight

Reviews

[Ardeh]

I can feel your emotions and with such few lines, you chose words which have characters. I feel for you and I am sorry for your loss.

[Michael N.]

I think it's amazing how you can convey such raw emotion in such few lines, great work! I think it was really deep as well, and I'm sorry for Anne. That was sweet of you to dedicate this to her!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is very good...i like it...but at least she doesnt have to go through pain and stuff...although you will miss her very very much...life just happens...happy or sad
Great Job

This is very deep, in so few lines.
She'd be proud, you know.

[Marilu Elizabeth]

........thats sweet janik to write a poem 4 her

[Joel Alvarado]

Vivid, yet pale and cold. Nice work. I'm sorry for your loss but with time, you will heal and the memories will be as sweet as ever. May your mind be at peace.