Silver threads

For someone very special, I hope you like it.

I look deep within myself

And see the pure silver threads

That connect our minds, our souls, and our hearts as one

 

I let the threads pull me closer

To your mind, soul, and heart

 

I will not fight this love of ours

My heart won't let me

So instead I embrace it

 

I instictively reach out

To find you reaching too

My dreams are coming true

I've found my prince, the only one for me

 

Author's Note

I think this poem kinda sucks, but tell me if you think it doesn't.

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Princess JaniK,

This is a lovely piece. The opening idea of "silver threads" is wonderful.

Best regards,

Rick

[Zak]

awww, man. That's great. The title really shows the bond you have between you and your love, since silver is a strong, durable passionate metal. It means you can never be torn apart. Wonderful work of art here. Great!

[BULLET FOR MY VALENTINE]

I luv the old country and western classic Silver threads and golden needles by Linda r�nst�dte which you check out reminds me of ur wonderful poem

It doesn't suck at all. It's straight from the heart, isn't it? The "silver threads" are different and unique.
I really, really like it.

[Marilu Elizabeth]

it doesnt suck i LOVE it jani