I Am Gone

I am gone

And hope you're missing me

I walked out of your life

I am free

I am proud

To finally have the strength to leave

I'll never come back

I am gone

Reviews

[Jemma]

It takes a lot of stength to leave. To leave what you know and venture into the unknown. It reminds me of my favriout line "Look at me, look at what you've done to me, now watch me go."
The last part "Watch me go" I think really relates to this.
Great write.

[deeps]

This is so sad,
At least you have strength to carry on.

[fantasylover13]

i like this poem its nice and it tells me to let go of things that should be let go it makes me feel free and it makes me feel like i have a life and i should be living it to the fullest

[Alexander Z. Anthony]

I don't find this Sad at all! I look at it like this person is liberated! Free to be themselves.
The character has finally gained the strength to leave a bad relationship.
Kudos!

[Smile It's Megan&hearts..]

Very good I believe. It definately can be related to. I enjoy that in writings :]. So, indeed, a good write.

[Marilu Elizabeth]

..? very sad good write jani

[BULLET FOR MY VALENTINE]

Oh i am so sad after reading this what will i do without you oh dear now where are those kleenex tissues? very sad poem i think it is meant for someone once who you knew who was special thanks for sharing.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear PJ,

This is such a simple and fine declaration of independence and moving on. Very nice writing. Greatly enjoyed.

Best regards,

Rick