I'm Loving This Boy

I'm no longer with this boy, but I decided to leave this poem here anyways.

I'm loving this boy

With his bright blue eyes and warm heart

I'm loving this boy

More than everything else in my life

I'm loving this boy

More and more each day

I'm loving this boy

And he's loving me

Reviews

[Smile It's Megan&hearts..]

Aww

[Jemma]

Aww this was sweet.

I also noticed your pm.

He asked you to marry him after graduation. So congrads

[PaperHearts]

That was very sweet! I liked the shortness of it, and the repetition of 'I'm loving this boy'.
It brought a smile to my face, and I felt that I could really relate to it.
Good job,
~PapaerHearts

[Ellusive Rose]

Very cool and understandable. I like the feeling expressed in it. Good job and keep writing.

[Jenn Wathen]

Its really good i like it ! Its has a feel to it that i like

[V. Lucien Maier]

Very light, and sweet. Nice structure and flow

[Marilu Elizabeth]

very good tells us just how much you luv that "Boy";D...good job

~*MariluLUVSJo*~

[Wolfe Greytome]

Short, simple and to the point. Very well done.