An Angel's Kiss

Message me if you are curious, I'm open to explaining

 

In the middle of an ongoing war

I feared I'd never see the light of day

My heart was growing cold and numb

My vision was spotted grey

The sweet abyss that called my name

Was like an exit I couldn't reach

An angel swept down from heaven above

And followed me to the gates of hell

I was confused, this wasn't that sweet abyss

And then the angel kissed me

And I started to feel warmth once more

The numbness was leaving with the cold

And I never again doubted an angel's kiss

Author's Note

I'll write a short story soon that helps everyone understand my position in this if they'd like me to.

Reviews

[Jessi Webb =)]

Liked it .

Loved it .

[poemsforlife]

nice poem and especially the feeling behind it very nice

[E-man]

the title itself reminds me of the song lips of an angel by hinder

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

I think your cultivation of writing excellent poems once again has surpassed itself, i was very taken a back by your eloquent use of words and i like this new directio you are taking, as soon as i am able to print my own poems i may get back in the saddle of writing a few poems myself in a new style, i think nursery rhyme poems are out of season don't you?
your poems are quite diverse and say so much about you as a person.
By the way i will send you an e-mail soon from my hotmail account ok now i know your address.M

[eternalbliss]

very nice...it portrays a kind of sentiment on a war with onesself. very impressive poem

[VintageHottie]

I loved it! There are a lot of emotions in this write.
It reminds me of Whisky ;) Except the numbness usually is one of the side effects XD Well, that is what I got out of it anyway....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very impressive little poem... I got to say is what i gather from this piece is sometime what you want and what you need are two different things and though a prayer may go directly go unanswered it will come in the form of words you never spoke. Despite being right or wrong it was a creative piece that makes you think.

[Zak]

Hey, whether you write a short story or not, it's just what you are feeling inside, friend. It's a portrayal of what you feel. Never forget that. You will always have an angel to give you a kiss...very good.

ZTM

[Jemma]

I saw the angels kiss and really this whole poem on a sucidal note.
The on going war within.
Growing numb.
Moving into death is when you start to feel the "warmth" or alive
But that is just my view on it.
Nice write.

[Smile It's Megan&hearts..]

I really liked this.
Short and sweet.
I don't fully understand it but I do like this.
Nice write :]