I'll Take No More

I give in, unable to take it anymore

I pull the razor through my skin, letting the blood flow

I close my eyes, thinking this will be easier

I cut myself once more, feeling the blood leak from me

My hand trembles, I don't know why I'm doing this

I've been through alot, he just really got to me

He makes me feel like crap, I cry everytime

I won't allow this to happen anymore, I won't let you hear me cry

I'm through with playing your silly games, I'm not having fun

You need to just leave me alone, stop trying to hurt me

I'm done crying, you won't get to me

I'm done cutting, I put down my blade

I'll take no more

I'll take no more.......

Reviews

[Ann Outlaw]

The way you put the words together here is nicely done. If this is written from personal experience, from a stranger on the internet, I am proud of you. It takes a lot of strength, self realization, and courage to finally put boundaries around the things and the people who cause us the most pain. Thank you for sharing and blessings to you.

[Twichi ^.^]

no1 should b able to take the amounts of pain they r handed...i can relate to this more than anyone should b able to say but i can... pain comes on so may diffrent levels and ways but it stays forever thats y its such a struggle...amazing poem

[E-man]

ouch,harsh I know first hand what this is like and I'm glad you found the courage in you to say you finally had enough

[BLACKCRUSH]

It really sounds like your going through some heavy emotions right now. I'm glad your expressing your self through writing and hopefully not cutting. I can tell you from experience that cutting only make things worse, you have to reach out in other ways in order to get past what your going through.I'm really hoping that you realize that no guy is worth destroying your beautiful self.I admire you for having the courage to share this personal piece.

[Jemma]

Addictions arn't easy to break >.<
You made it seem simple.
But no guy is worth crying for.
And nothing is worth cutting for.
Cause those scars are just another reminder.

[Dark Wanderer]

Im glad that you were able to liberate yourself...the blood in your veins is for you, and you alone. It doesnt belong to anyone else, so its not worth spilling over someone or something that will only want more.

A few spelling errors, but otherwise very expressive