Life

I don't think this is very good.

Life is a one way road

There's no going back

Everything happens for a reason

There's no such thing as accidents

 

Hearts are broken

So we can learn to love the one's we have

Decisions are made

Some harder than others

 

Life comes and goes

Death happening all the time

Troubled teens grow in numbers

Suicide rates go up

 

Life is impossible at times

But that's life for ya

Everything happens for a reasons

So live life to the fullest and have no regrets

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

Hey janice i totally agree with your comments here and love the unique writing style which you have brought to the readers here, a very well written poem with refreshing common sense and realism that nothing is ever decided without regrets or knowing that things might work out differently,hindsight is a wonderful thing,one must just go with instinct and good sense of judgement, it is also a fact that we are not always blessed with choice and we have to make the best of things.
The only thing we are guarenteed in life is death and taxes and that we will always be surrounded by the stench of death and betrayal.
As for young people becoming victims of suicide and generally going off the rails it is my belief that there isn't enough love or understanding let alone support for the young today and the world is too pressurised and makes lots of demands on them which they can never realisticly measure up to.

[Dillon Cotter]

very true, and i like this piece bc its down right in your face, saying the truth =]

I thought this was good... Has a good meaning to it. But I have a question... Your poem states that there is no such things a accidents... But does bumping into a person while walking still count as an accident, or making a remark and thinking later that you shouldn't have said that?... just kidding. nice job.