Before You

I was lost before you found me

Hurt before you healed me

Broken before you loved me

Dead before you saved me

 

I was found before you left me

Healed before you hurt me

In one piece before you broke me

Alive before you killed me

 

I'm drowning in your blood

Suffocating on your hate

Dying from a broken heart

And dead before you left

 

 

Reviews

[mmzx]

ooh i like the first paragraph!
:D

[chloe cruz]

I loved the similar repetition... it was amazingly well-written. Beautiful. Thank you so much for entering this into my contest: The Heart's Demise.

Again, wonderful. And a perfect flow helped!

"I'm drowning in your blood

Suffocating on your hate

Dying from a broken heart

And dead before you left."

Such a beautiful ending. Heartbreaking, heart-wrenching... yet so, so, so beautiful.

Chloe.

P.S. - I swear to god, that migraine is stubborn as hell and just won't go away. XD