Living in Pieces

I'm broken, living in pieces

I'm falling apart

And loosing control

I'm living in pieces

And everywhere you'll go

You'll find another piece of me there,

A reminder that you broke me

 

 

Reviews

[Cassandra D.]

Very nice poem.
It's completely understandable.

[The Flawed]

I like it short and raw
But what do I know??
Well done

[Twichi ^.^]

very nice, and i know what u mean here... i like it